I’m studying for my English class and need an explanation.
Attached following are the essay and an article, based on the below comments from peer reviews edit draft #1. ( An requirements/ rubric will also be attached to follow up )
Here are the comments :
– ” I would suggest to frame the introduction a little more toward “the author does____” & “effective rhetorical strategies are___” , frame your points i terms of the author opposed of summary
-Perhaps instead of stating “ethos, pathos &logos” throughout the book give specific example
-Summary could be more concise, should probably revolve more around the article, mention a little bit on the author
-thesis should be more about article- less broad
– use more of the examples from the author- to go along with explanation of Greek and life ( minimum of at least 5 pages )